Pete Tennant has said some good things about this story, which first appeared in Black Static 20. You can read Pete’s review here if you’re so inclined http://trumpetville.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/at-night-when-the-demons-come-by-ray-cluley/
You may remember I was developing it as a graphic novel, too. That’s back on the go now, with a guy called Karl Birkelbach who’s done some great preliminary sketches. I’ll pop some on this site from time to time once we’ve run with it a while.